from his gilded frame

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Poetry/Monoku/from his gilded frame
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1600-964-28
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, November 28, 2023
For the International Contest, Monotangled Sense
Sponsor, Dilly Dally, Judged 12/07/2023

Fifth Place

he watches me and whispers, come- then ... I am within the frame with him

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/9/2023 12:30:00 AM

Beautiful! A superb spiritual message, warmest congratulations on your win, Constance

Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2023 11:04:00 PM

Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate

Silent One

Date: 12/8/2023 9:39:00 AM

A deep one liner..Congratulations on your placement

Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2023 11:04:00 PM

Silent, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate

John Lawless

Date: 11/28/2023 4:16:00 PM

OK, 0K, go ahead Constance....just leave us hanging after the PSSST...over here intro. You gotta keep goin' with this theme.

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2023 1:49:00 PM

John, thank you so much for the visit and comment... I could write a book about the man in the painting ... blessings