Debbie Duncan Poet Crown of Sonnets

From Him

Heartbroken 
I guess I was wrong.
I'm a total fool.
My love for you was so strong.
How could I have ever loved you?

You said he was no one.
You had no idea who he is.
Well, it's obvious he's someone.
With him, I knew what you did.

I gave you all my love.
You'll never know how much I cared.
My life just fell apart.
This pain I just can't bare.

I've been through this before.
Though it hadn't been with you.
I never thought you'd do this.
I always thought you would be true.

Now I must live my life without you.
Together we'll never be.
For you've found someone new.
And no longer need me.

  
12  10   1997  From " his " point of view.

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Don Johnson February 17, 2013 at 3:01 PM love an hurt, cast into the dirt , feels this poor castaway, the only cure so be alert, is catch his brother hey.... some times feet aren't made of clay... says johnson its a certifyable way.. Don re: "From Him" by Debbie Duncan Debbie Duncan February 17, 2013 at 10:49 PM Hi Don.

Poet Destroyer A February 14, 2013 at 8:37 PM Debbie, , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA Debbie Duncan February 14, 2013 at 8:57 PM Thank you Linda ;}

Don Johnson January 7, 2013 at 10:55 PM my ex ran off in 98, with wife stealing cousin Wayne, Wayne died of cancer of the prostate, which sadly burst his bubble, pain, yet i am sorry mate.... Don Johnson January 14, 2013 at 11:45 PM use that white of light sweet babe, a healing there for you, blowing kissesis sweet delight, it brings a smile, it do....

Keith Bickerstaffe December 29, 2012 at 6:23 PM How sad... it's hard to say I 'enjoyed' this poem because of its content. However, it is very well written. Lovely flow and rhyming! Well done Debbie!! Best wishes, Keith. (PS HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!) Debbie Duncan December 29, 2012 at 6:37 PM Thank you Keith,, this is old poem 1990's ;} Happy New Year to you and yours ;}

Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2012 at 4:44 PM Just came here to say MERRY CHRISTMAS to YOU.

Elizabeth O'Driscoll December 22, 2012 at 3:51 PM Enjoyed this Debbie, love Elizabeth Debbie Duncan December 23, 2012 at 12:35 AM Thank you Liz ;}

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2012 at 6:13 PM this is so interesting that you saw through HIS eyes, it shows your sensitive nature!! Debbie Duncan December 21, 2012 at 10:25 AM Thank you for reading Andrea ;}

Lillie Williams December 15, 2012 at 8:28 PM WOW! heartbreaking. Words that I would like to say but never found a way to arrange them the way that you have. Marvelous job Debbie, Marvelous job! Debbie Duncan December 15, 2012 at 9:10 PM Thank you Lillie ;}

Sukmawati Komala November 18, 2012 at 11:18 PM Dear Debbie..here you have penned another soupmail for all the readers..very nice..enjoyed !!! <3 <3 <3 SK...wishing you have a blessed day :) Debbie Duncan November 19, 2012 at 1:24 AM Thank you Sukmawati,,,, this was things he said to me,,,, " my X " He thought I was messing around, when we were first together. He got over it , we lasted 17 years ,,,,you have a beautiful day ;}

Joe Maverick November 12, 2012 at 2:29 PM Well Debbie I can see this was taken from tough experience, you did well in its expressions.." Debbie Duncan November 12, 2012 at 8:44 PM Hi Joe,,,, this was things he said to me,,,, " my X " He thought I was messing around, when we were first together. He got over it , we lasted 17 years ;},,,, Thank you for reading my/ his words,,,, Have a blessed day ;}

Michael J. Falotico November 12, 2012 at 12:08 PM Great way to express from a different side. Wonderful. Enjoyed. Michael Debbie Duncan November 12, 2012 at 12:10 PM Thank you Michael ;}

Cecilia Macfarlane November 12, 2012 at 4:36 AM I like how you wrote it from his point of view....shows integrity of character, you are a wise lady Debbie! Excellent write! Hugs Debbie Duncan November 12, 2012 at 11:30 AM Thank you Cecilia ;} have a great day !

Jancarl Campi November 11, 2012 at 9:05 PM Perhaps it is all for the best. Take care and God bless. Thanks for reading my work, pleased that you liked it. Debbie Duncan November 12, 2012 at 11:28 AM Thank you for reading my words Jancarl ;}

Skat A November 11, 2012 at 5:01 PM Debbie, no one deserves to be dumped on, over insecurities. However I hope you are over him. I can go on about this subject, but I will stop here. You might not want to hear this! You are better without him. Specifically since you noted that he found some one so quickly. ~SKAT~ Debbie Duncan November 11, 2012 at 5:33 PM Thank you for reading my words SKAT ;} I've been single going on six years now !

Debbie Guzzi November 11, 2012 at 2:41 PM Love, can't live with it or without it. Thanks for stopping by my writes. Light & Love Debbie Duncan November 11, 2012 at 3:09 PM Hi Debbie,,,,, this is his point of view,,,, thank you for reading ;}

Elizabeth Wesley November 9, 2012 at 2:51 PM Must have been an awful experience for you till the truth sank in. Hard to know someone else completely I think which always causes problems. So sad,and recovery takes its own sweet time. Debbie Duncan November 9, 2012 at 4:05 PM Hi " elizabeth" this is / was my X's point of view.... He thought I was messing around, when we were first together. He got over it , we lasted 17 years ;},,,, Have a blessed day ;}

Laila Andresen Mjelde November 9, 2012 at 11:30 AM Hey hey Debbie, today I am on P.S. looking, it is a long time since I've been here but now I'm here to read your poems, in the hope that you will read my latest poem, I liked your poem a lot. xoxo - Laila Debbie Duncan November 9, 2012 at 11:44 AM Why thank you Laila ;} this is/ was my X's point of view.... He thought I was messing around, when we were first together. He got over it , we lasted 17 years ;},,,, I will surely read from you. Have a blessed day ;}

Poet Destroyer A November 5, 2012 at 7:47 PM HI Debbie, wow...this can be heartbreaking... Sometimes it is for the best... always~pd Debbie Duncan November 5, 2012 at 10:21 PM Hi poet ,,,, this poem is from his side to me,,, not me to him. He thought I was messing around, when we were first together. He got over it , we lasted 17 years ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2012 at 3:32 AM A well written poem Debbie, sad story. Thank you for visiting my poem. - Wish you a nice day and a delightful new week. - oxox a hug to you from Anne-Lise :)

Don Johnson November 4, 2012 at 6:44 PM loved n dumped ...an bloody gasumped.. i know the feeling here , better things around the corner some, grab-quick-fore they dissapear... Debbie Duncan November 4, 2012 at 6:59 PM Hello Don,, this was from my X who thought I was messing around, when we were first together. He got over it , we lasted 17 years ;}