From Freedom To Confinement

The clock of freedom ticks away, and Anne
acknowledging nearing fate
takes one last look around...


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Kimo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Raynes Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 10:05 PM
this is a great little Kimo, sort of sad, nice
Yvonne Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 8:36 PM
Just added you to my fav poet list!
Yvonne Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 8:35 PM
Belated congratulations on your win with this little gem!
Squyres Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 10:17 AM
Love the feel of the words and wonderful interpretation of the image. Congrats on your win !!
Nance Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Oh that is different, the last look before the darkness comes, good job on your win sweetie.
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 11:18 AM
Congrats Sneha. Love>
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations :-) Hugs Jan xx
Thirtyseven Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 9:54 AM
It leaves us in suspense, a real teaser. Nicely done.
Lawless Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 5:11 PM
The foreman will now read the verdict...A little bit of darkness in this one, well done with a barb.
Pinet Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 1:06 PM
Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination and talent. It flows like the currents of life with a realistic crispness. Emile. #7
Allison Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 12:59 PM
The image has an Alice in Wonderland quality to it - love your interpretation of the picture - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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