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From Formlessness To Something

In empty space in the sky, mist comes together to form clouds Deep in the dark, fireflies come together to form a divine glow, creating a beautiful reflection on the crystalline pond In a thick forest, strangers walk through it day by day, later creating a path that was not there before Drops of rain fall from the cloudy sky to a hollow ground, to form a lake Love comes to be when two strangers meet, and embrace each other with a flame of romance and passion By: Teddy Kimathi Choice of Motif: Philosophical

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/6/2014 8:17:00 PM
very nice analogy to love. Congrats on your win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/7/2014 12:11:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. You are too kind! :-)
Date: 3/5/2014 1:10:00 PM
A beautiful quill! Congrats on the win!!!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/6/2014 1:29:00 AM
Thanks alot for for your applause Oyewole! :-)
Date: 3/5/2014 7:20:00 AM
- Hello Teddy, congratulations on your excellent winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/5/2014 7:30:00 AM
Thanks again for your applaud Anne Lise! :-)
Date: 3/5/2014 6:54:00 AM
A very moving poem. I love the fireflies putting a light in the darkness. Congrats on your win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/5/2014 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Monterey! My poetic breath feeds on mystery.
Date: 3/5/2014 6:21:00 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/5/2014 7:28:00 AM
Thanks KAYOD5! :-)
Date: 3/5/2014 5:13:00 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/5/2014 6:14:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Date: 3/1/2014 12:28:00 PM
Very interest motif for a poem. Excellent imagery. I liked the creation of a path in particular. Cheers, Roy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/3/2014 12:01:00 AM
Thanks Roy! :)

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