From Fog Into Mist

Creating
Fine mist from the fog
Living with
Clouds below
Concentrating, believing
The clouds come alive

Russell Sivey

Form: Shadorma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 21, 2011 at 12:03 AM
These latest are ohhh so relaxing..Did I call your previous senryu a haiku? Just so excited to be back. ha ha. Tell me if I am "into the mind of the poet" here..if u concentrate and believe while concentrating on the fog, it will transform it into beautiful clouds? Let me know. I really like it. G.
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