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From Deep Night

Written by Joseph Osita From Deep Night Beneath Owl's Cold weep of ages And fireflies assembly of light-tailed ants Restless words creep into my slumbering hearts Thought tape message As it crawls Ink warms Up For the contest:’ Where your poetry comes from' Sponsore:Michael J Falotico

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Date: 8/1/2011 4:04:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest, a very original take on the theme...
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Date: 8/1/2011 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem placing in Michael J. Falotico's " Where Your Poetry Comes From" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2011 3:12:00 PM
A "Where Your Poetry Comes From" Winner Congratulations! Caryl
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Date: 7/31/2011 8:31:00 AM
Love this Joseph, congratulations on your win in Michael's contest ;)
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Date: 7/30/2011 10:27:00 PM
I love the line "And fireflies assembly of light-tailed ants", an excellent piece of poetry, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/30/2011 3:07:00 PM
yours was one of the most unique for sure. A big congrats to you!!
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Date: 7/30/2011 1:32:00 PM
truly remarkable, joseph...a round of sparkling cheers for your great win! :)huggs!
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Date: 7/30/2011 1:09:00 PM
Wonderful write here Joseph...love it.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/30/2011 9:50:00 AM
Congrats Joseph on a super sixth place win with this dynamic delight in poetry luv..
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Date: 7/30/2011 9:42:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS~~~what a wonderful thoughts~~~smile~~~~well-deserved...*-*junjun
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Date: 7/30/2011 8:53:00 AM
Congrats My Poet friend!!!!! always Michael
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Date: 7/29/2011 9:21:00 PM
Beautifully written Joseph!!!!!
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:16:00 PM
I like how you use imagery from the night creatures for your poem. Good one! Iam a night owl so I really like this.
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Date: 7/27/2011 1:00:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Joseph. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol
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