Joseph Osita Poet Tetractys

From Deep Night

Written by Joseph Osita



                                     From
                                 Deep Night
                               Beneath Owl's
                           Cold weep of ages
            And fireflies assembly of light-tailed ants
        Restless words creep into my slumbering hearts
                       Thought tape message
                                 As it crawls
                                 Ink warms
                                       Up


 For the contest:’ Where your poetry comes  from'
 Sponsore:Michael J Falotico

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Charlotte Puddifoot August 1, 2011 at 4:04 PM congrats on your win in the contest, a very original take on the theme...

Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2011 at 1:51 PM Congratulations on your poem placing in Michael J. Falotico's " Where Your Poetry Comes From" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale July 31, 2011 at 3:12 PM A "Where Your Poetry Comes From" Winner Congratulations! Caryl

Wilma Neels July 31, 2011 at 8:31 AM Love this Joseph, congratulations on your win in Michael's contest ;)

Tim B July 30, 2011 at 10:27 PM I love the line "And fireflies assembly of light-tailed ants", an excellent piece of poetry, congratulations on your win.

Andrea Dietrich July 30, 2011 at 3:07 PM yours was one of the most unique for sure. A big congrats to you!!

Nette Onclaud July 30, 2011 at 1:32 PM truly remarkable, joseph...a round of sparkling cheers for your great win! :)huggs!

Kash Poet July 30, 2011 at 1:09 PM Wonderful write here Joseph...love it.Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 30, 2011 at 9:50 AM Congrats Joseph on a super sixth place win with this dynamic delight in poetry luv..

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 30, 2011 at 9:42 AM CONGRATULATIONS~~~what a wonderful thoughts~~~smile~~~~well-deserved...*-*junjun

Michael J. Falotico July 30, 2011 at 8:53 AM Congrats My Poet friend!!!!! always Michael

Chiquitachiamaka Baity July 29, 2011 at 9:21 PM Beautifully written Joseph!!!!!

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2011 at 10:16 PM I like how you use imagery from the night creatures for your poem. Good one! Iam a night owl so I really like this.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2011 at 1:00 PM Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Joseph. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol