From Between the Pickets

She waits by the fence
A gentle breeze through her skirt

She waits by the fence
Aimlessly shifting her toes in the dirt

She waits by the fence
Birds overhead silently southward fly

She waits by the fence
Wiping tears from her eyes, God damn him, why

She waits by the fence
Minutes to hours, hours to day, days become a week

She waits by the fence
The sun slipping east, the warmth on her cheek

Turning to leave, her yard, her purpose, her fence
Her eyes meet the one’s that left her sometime hence
The sky orangish pink with a border of robin’s egg blue
No words are spoken, not certain that it is true

And still the fence waits
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Moreno Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 3:04 AM
Christian, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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October 6, 2009 at 7:06 AM
lovely poem, so sad, congrats on the featured poem
Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 3:42 PM
Congratulations of this poem being featured this week. I like the way you tell the story of one waiting on their love and the descriptiveness is excellent. Keep writing. Sara
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October 5, 2009 at 11:25 AM
Congratulations on your feature poem this week >> James
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October 5, 2009 at 3:54 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Christian. Love, Carol
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October 5, 2009 at 3:19 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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