James Peranteau Poet Free verse

From Behind the Oak

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                From behind the oak
                mine eyne curved it's
                           girth

                      to spectate
                        her quiet
                         undress

         The leaves beneath mine feet
                       screamed
                     as my heart
            and hern flesh instantly
                        became
                covered with cloth
                  leaving me with

                  poetic thoughts

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Joseph Spence Sr June 29, 2010 at 8:02 PM There could have been a Peeping Tom in the woods. I like the essence of the poem and the images. Great job! Joseph

Oscar Mascarenhas June 18, 2010 at 7:44 AM how i wish u had kept the pen flowing on this one......... :D its intriguing really.... to my favourites without a doubt cheers oscar

C.C Bloomsfield June 17, 2010 at 7:57 AM Exceptional!Awesome!This goes tmfs!Corva,lol!

Sara Kendrick June 16, 2010 at 7:04 AM Excellent metaphoric language used to suggest something more than meets the eye..Keep the creative pen flowing producing demure luring writes..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Daniel Cwiak June 15, 2010 at 9:15 AM Nicely written and gives that sense of illusion that you want to see more, but can only imagine in your own mind. I loved it! Dan C

Carolyn Devonshire June 15, 2010 at 8:45 AM Very nicely written, James. You are a master at this type of poetry, saying just enough to provoke interest! Well done, my friend. Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta June 15, 2010 at 8:16 AM Simply enjoyed it, James

Joshua Michael Dolezal June 15, 2010 at 7:48 AM Hahaha. Very nice.