From Above

I'm dreaming of raindrops
warm, wet and sweet

falling like pillows
splashing my feet

moments pass by
rain turns to snow

candy from heaven
surely I know!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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George Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 8:09 PM
How rain drops fall warm and wet, then turn to snow and candy ! Sweet little write, James. Congratulations on your win !
Goff Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 9:59 PM
Thanks my friend...
A   Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 11:29 PM
congratulations on your featured poem of the week... Linda
Adams Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 8:28 PM
what a beauty....congrats on being featured!
Hamilton Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 5:52 AM
such great imagery here Geoff I adore it congrats on being featured Shadow x smile
Song Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 9:58 PM
falling like pillows, splashing my feet!! splendid! i love this!
Austin Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 8:16 AM
"Singin in the rain," so to speak. Enjoyed your positive outlook. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Atanacio Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 9:48 AM
sweet and all from above
Shango Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 9:27 AM
This poem flows so easily carrying its richness of rhyme and rhthym to a powerful moment of self discovery. Peace and Love
Christian Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 4:23 AM
oh so sweet, all good things comes from above, thanks for your feed back on mu poem in my heart God bless you from diane
Ginn Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 6:03 PM
Okay you can just keep your snow candy at this point in the game. Fun colorful write Jim.
Parish Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 9:34 AM
Love the imagery of this. I especially like the first stanza...
Townsend Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 6:28 AM
Absolutely enchanting as visions of spring fill my head... I know the snow is a good thing but I am ready to be done with the cold. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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