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From a Distance

Dusk fades again…must I entreat. As glimpses peer over the sea; Past borders of uncertainty. Where love's yearning becomes a feat . The minutes change to waves and rhyme Nights follow his prints…sand aflame; This trace I feel from whither came My destiny on edge of time: A breath; a sigh, I turn alone A whisper blows as moments freeze-- The distant shores, a fleeting breeze My prayers dull like hardened stone: One rowboat tugs along the quay Yet his image through mist unseen... Until he calls behind moon's sheen Our faith affirmed from heaven's ray. John Hamilton's Best Rhyming Poem April-July15,2018 Contest Written 6/19/2018 Repost 7/10/2018

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Date: 7/13/2018 7:04:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. Well done!
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Date: 7/13/2018 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. Nicely written.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:49:00 PM
Returning with congratulations, Nette, on your excellent win for your exquisite poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/12/2018 2:52:00 PM
A breathtaking homage to faith Nette! Congratulations on this beauty taking second place! : )
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:21:00 AM
A beautiful write Nette, another worthy winner from your pen!
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Date: 6/28/2018 2:13:00 AM
No comments on the lines...only adoration.Hugs!>Rajat
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Date: 6/24/2018 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. Well done. And, thank you!
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Date: 6/22/2018 7:22:00 PM
Well done Nette, ...those often too long awaited homecomings....
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Date: 6/22/2018 10:13:00 AM
Wow! Very beautiful, nette! Glad I did not have to judge this contest. This is excellent.
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Date: 6/22/2018 8:05:00 AM
This is lovely, Nette. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 6/19/2018 7:21:00 AM
I felt your words flow in this one... Beautiful last stanza...
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Date: 6/19/2018 3:10:00 AM
This is so lovely, I feel so guilty not being around as much! This poem made think, one day I hope all us poets from distant shores can meet!!!
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Date: 6/18/2018 9:50:00 PM
Amazing Nette, a fave for me and I hope a win for you. Mick
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Date: 6/18/2018 6:19:00 PM
A delicately delivered poem of devotion so exquisitely expressed, Nette. Best wishes for a win!
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Date: 6/18/2018 4:27:00 PM
A charming poem, delicately rendered. Beautiful words adorn the journey..a creative passage..well written, as always, nette..best for a win.
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