From a Distance

Dusk fades again…must I entreat. As glimpses peer over the sea; Past borders of uncertainty. Where love's yearning becomes a feat . The minutes change to waves and rhyme Nights follow his prints…sand aflame; This trace I feel from whither came My destiny on edge of time: A breath; a sigh, I turn alone A whisper blows as moments freeze-- The distant shores, a fleeting breeze My prayers dull like hardened stone: One rowboat tugs along the quay Yet his image through mist unseen... Until he calls behind moon's sheen Our faith affirmed from heaven's ray. John Hamilton's Best Rhyming Poem April-July15,2018 Contest Written 6/19/2018 Repost 7/10/2018
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Gentry Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 7:04 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. Well done!
Roper Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. Nicely written.... Hugs Eve
Ashley Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Returning with congratulations, Nette, on your excellent win for your exquisite poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 2:52 PM
A breathtaking homage to faith Nette! Congratulations on this beauty taking second place! : )
Hamilton Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 9:21 AM
A beautiful write Nette, another worthy winner from your pen!
Chakrabarty Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 2:13 AM
No comments on the lines...only adoration.Hugs!>Rajat
Gentry Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. Well done. And, thank you!
Lawless Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 7:22 PM
Well done Nette, ...those often too long awaited homecomings....
Turner Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Wow! Very beautiful, nette! Glad I did not have to judge this contest. This is excellent.
Canerdy Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 8:05 AM
This is lovely, Nette. CONGRATS! Janice
One Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 7:21 AM
I felt your words flow in this one... Beautiful last stanza...
Vaso Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 3:10 AM
This is so lovely, I feel so guilty not being around as much! This poem made think, one day I hope all us poets from distant shores can meet!!!
Talbot Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 9:50 PM
Amazing Nette, a fave for me and I hope a win for you. Mick
Ashley Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 6:19 PM
A delicately delivered poem of devotion so exquisitely expressed, Nette. Best wishes for a win!
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 4:27 PM
A charming poem, delicately rendered. Beautiful words adorn the journey..a creative passage..well written, as always, nette..best for a win.
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