Susan Gentry Poet Pantoum

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Frolicking Kitten and Butterflies

Both beautiful bright butterflies and bees
Fluttering over flourishing flower fields
In sustaining space and symmetric ease
All the gentle joys a wonderland yields
 
Fluttering over flourishing flower fields
My persistent sounds are softly heard
All the gentle joys a wonderland yields
As a calico kitten, I meow and purr
 
My persistent sounds are softly heard
Rolling and frolicking on God’s earth
As a calico kitten, I meow and purr
Slipping and falling over plants and dirt
 
Rolling and frolicking on God’s earth
In sustaining space and symmetric ease
Slipping and falling over plants and dirt 
Both beautiful bright butterflies and bees

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Written 2-23-2016

For 'Kitten and Butterflies' Contest sponsored by Eve Roper
First Place

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Karen Da August 4, 2018 at 6:11 AM Kittens and butterflies are undoubtedly beautiful and the same goes with this poem of yours... Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:27 AM So sweet. Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2016 at 11:57 PM Susan, CONGRATS on your awesome "Kitten & Butterfly win." Love Linda Susan Gentry August 5, 2018 at 6:27 AM :)

James Inman March 19, 2016 at 11:09 PM Susan, beautiful choice of phrases.

Joseph May March 19, 2016 at 9:13 PM Congrats on your win Susan

Vladislav Raven March 19, 2016 at 8:33 PM Hi Susan, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. I enjoyed the read....Vlad.

Sara Kendrick March 19, 2016 at 6:07 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Jan Allison March 19, 2016 at 4:23 PM A delightful poem Susan and I love the phrase calico kitten:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper March 19, 2016 at 4:21 PM Susan,thank you all for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT : ) Hugs Eve

Anthony Mark February 25, 2016 at 9:43 PM Technically a great ell thought out write, this form can trip up the over ambitious, looking for that killer last stanza, you already had the ingredients, and I doff my cap to beauty unwound, ..well done... Susan Gentry March 4, 2016 at 1:51 AM Such a wonderful comment! Appreciate it and appreciate you. :)

CayCay Godwin February 24, 2016 at 6:15 PM You did a wonderful job with the form and content. I enjoyed the read very much and wish you all the best. A delightful poem ... CayCay Susan Gentry February 25, 2016 at 8:40 AM Thank you CayCay! Appreciate your comments and that you took time to read. :)

Brian Mcclain February 24, 2016 at 10:00 AM Nice imagery, nice soft rhythm--soft as a kitten! Very well written--good luck in the contest. Susan Gentry February 25, 2016 at 8:38 AM Ahhh thank you so much Brian! Appreciate this.

Daniel Turner February 24, 2016 at 7:15 AM Great alliteration, Susan.Very fun read. Kinda gives one a fuzzy feeling. Good luck in contest. Susan Gentry February 24, 2016 at 8:03 AM Ahhh! Thank you! :)