Frolicking Kitten and Butterflies

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Both beautiful bright butterflies and bees
Fluttering over flourishing flower fields
In sustaining space and symmetric ease
All the gentle joys a wonderland yields
 
Fluttering over flourishing flower fields
My persistent sounds are softly heard
All the gentle joys a wonderland yields
As a calico kitten, I meow and purr
 
My persistent sounds are softly heard
Rolling and frolicking on God’s earth
As a calico kitten, I meow and purr
Slipping and falling over plants and dirt
 
Rolling and frolicking on God’s earth
In sustaining space and symmetric ease
Slipping and falling over plants and dirt 
Both beautiful bright butterflies and bees

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Written 2-23-2016

For 'Kitten and Butterflies' Contest sponsored by Eve Roper
First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/4/2018 6:11:00 AM
Kittens and butterflies are undoubtedly beautiful and the same goes with this poem of yours...
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/5/2018 6:27:00 AM
So sweet. Thank you.
Date: 3/20/2016 11:57:00 PM
Susan, CONGRATS on your awesome "Kitten & Butterfly win." Love Linda
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/5/2018 6:27:00 AM
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Date: 3/19/2016 11:09:00 PM
Susan, beautiful choice of phrases.
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win Susan
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Date: 3/19/2016 8:33:00 PM
Hi Susan, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. I enjoyed the read....Vlad.
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Date: 3/19/2016 6:07:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 3/19/2016 4:23:00 PM
A delightful poem Susan and I love the phrase calico kitten:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/19/2016 4:21:00 PM
Susan,thank you all for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT : ) Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/25/2016 9:43:00 PM
Technically a great ell thought out write, this form can trip up the over ambitious, looking for that killer last stanza, you already had the ingredients, and I doff my cap to beauty unwound, ..well done...
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/4/2016 1:51:00 AM
Such a wonderful comment! Appreciate it and appreciate you. :)
Date: 2/24/2016 6:15:00 PM
You did a wonderful job with the form and content. I enjoyed the read very much and wish you all the best. A delightful poem ... CayCay
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/25/2016 8:40:00 AM
Thank you CayCay! Appreciate your comments and that you took time to read. :)
Date: 2/24/2016 10:00:00 AM
Nice imagery, nice soft rhythm--soft as a kitten! Very well written--good luck in the contest.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/25/2016 8:38:00 AM
Ahhh thank you so much Brian! Appreciate this.
Date: 2/24/2016 7:15:00 AM
Great alliteration, Susan.Very fun read. Kinda gives one a fuzzy feeling. Good luck in contest.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/24/2016 8:03:00 AM
Ahhh! Thank you! :)
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