Frogs In Love

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This is modified ghazal! In true ghazal the last but one word rhymes. It is easier to do that in Urdu but looks artificial in English. So taken the liberty of changing that rule but would still call it ghazal as the last rhyme word is repeated.

I can hear the frogs in the lily pond tonight, Amongst crickets and squally rain they sing tonight! I see ripples in lily pond in full moonlight, Must be a romantic union of frogs tonight! Lilies silently watch glowing amorous white, Like holding lunar candles in the depth of night! Many amphibian eyes twinkle, twinkle bright, White trousers speckled green is the dress code tonight! Lady frogs need to wear no lipstick to look right, Gentleman ready to dance if they spawn tonight! In glory of celebration not all is right, Lurking in the dark will be hungry snakes tonight! 1st placement Completely your choice(2) any theme and form Sponsor Brian strand Written 2/09/2020 This is a modified ghazal format.

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/2/2020 1:08:00 AM

Enjoyed your verse Krish, brought back memories when I was in Mauritius, one night we were walking by a large pond and it sounded like a jet engine, so loud. The frogs mating call, good luck in the contest. Tom

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/2/2020 1:29:00 AM

Thanks Tom! I used to love the sounds of nature as a boy! We are too busy these days and can’t spare time for nature! Thanks for your supportive words, Tom! Best wishes

Aditi Mishra

Date: 9/1/2020 11:34:00 PM

This is so picturesque and delightful. Wish you all the best for the contest Krish :)

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/2/2020 1:30:00 AM

Thanks Aditi. You must have enjoyed the rain and the frogs during the Monsoon! Wet grass and overflowing rivers! Best wishes!