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Frigid Noon

the still black eyed hare
rests under icicle eaves~
birds eat bearberries


12-15-2019
Writing Challenge, December - Winter Haiku or Senryu
Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobe Ode
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Roper Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 6:52 PM
Congratulations on your very descriptive win, Evelyn! Hugs Eve
Buehler Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 10:56 PM
My deepest thanks, Eve, for your kind thoughts and congratulations. Hugs and best of New Year wishes.
La France Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Evelyn, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your lovely haiku ~
Buehler Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 10:57 PM
Thank you so very much, Dear Heart. I'm honored.
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 2:30 PM
- Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Evelyn :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 5:35 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, for your kind congratulations and holiday wishes. Merry Christmas, and Happy New Year to you, too. :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Good one, Evelyn. Merry Christmas! Best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2020.
Buehler Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 5:31 PM
Thank very much, Line. A Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours as well! :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 5:31 PM
NIce wintery picture, Evelyn. Congrats for your win.
Buehler Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 7:25 PM
My heartfelt thanks for your lovely comment and congratulations, Andrea.
Labyrinth Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 4:33 AM
This is a form I don't write well at all. Evelyn, you've managed to capture so much colour, movement and analysis of stillness, which to me equates with peace. Beautiful.
Buehler Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 11:41 AM
You simply excel at the forms that you do write in, Leanne. I admire your poetry very much! Thank you so much for your appreciation of my poem. :)
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