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''Frigid Mind''

Lost in haze,floating in endless absence of body. Awaken in direct sight of pearl white gates. Lead off to visions of my mothers' face. She calls''Reach for me baby.'' Longing for her hand,my stance of no control slips. I fall into darkness. Lifting up in bed,I shiver cold from sweat. If not real?My tears would not exist. The Stream Of Consciousness Contest..... sponsored by...Debbi Guzzi written by..Kacey Greenlee kaceymike29

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Date: 4/27/2011 1:19:00 PM
I think this is just the type of work Deb is looking for in her contest, Kacey. Compelling images, disjointed effectively. The last line is quite profound! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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