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Frigid Air

the frigid air snaked across my skin and left it tingling with frostiness the windchill scoffed at me with it's hautiness as the air swirled around me I seek shelter and refuge from the intensely frigid elements

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/10/2008 3:50:00 PM
a great write, enjoyed this. thank you for reading my faith as small as mustard seed, you said that you said that it one of your comments, maybe that is where i got it, i get ideas in my head and i just write them. but I could delete it, if you wish me to.
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Date: 8/26/2008 3:44:00 PM
What a beauty your poem is! I live near Sintra in Portugal and have experienced the piercing frigid air you are talking about during winter. It really snakes over the bare skin. No wonder you seek shelter from frigid elements. Thanks for your liking my poem The Worshipper of Love. -Mohammad
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Date: 8/26/2008 3:49:00 AM
This is like a cold wind blowing accross my bare skin - perfect - i love it! Brr! love Kristin (ps-thanks for all your wonderful coments!!!)
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Date: 8/24/2008 12:50:00 PM
Brrr....I can feel the chill! Nicely done!....Sincerely, Carrie
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