Fries

so thin and hot and greasy
dipped in red ketchup
crispy, yummy, potatoes
fried and golden white
licking salted lips
suck fingers
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5/5/11
Contest:Fast Food Epulaeryu

foodepulaeryu

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 10, 2011 at 10:55 AM

I love fries!! Oh shucks, now I am craving for some big fat greasy ones-- crispy outside and just mealy inside oh durrrnnnn >.< -- replied to my blog-- thank you for dropping by there & happy mother's day hugs to you :)

Andrea Dietrich

May 8, 2011 at 9:02 PM

Debbie.I LOVE french fries. When my stepdad got paid every thursday night, it was our hamburger night, but instead of the two burgers /bag of fries we each got,I always opted for two bags of fries/one burger. I would still do it today if I ate those things very much anymore!! Yummy poem!

Carolyn Devonshire

May 8, 2011 at 5:44 PM

Deb, I really couldn't have come up with a fish "tale" like that. It happened just that way a few years ago... Hope you had a great Mothers Day and really enjoyed your blog! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

May 7, 2011 at 1:55 PM

greasy and good luck,,, have your self a wonderful MOTHERS DAY tomorrow... celebrate with smiles ... take care..P.D.

Daver Austin

May 6, 2011 at 3:24 PM

Yum! All I can think of is calories. Everyone says French fries are not good for you. to hell with them! Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 6, 2011 at 11:33 AM

It was a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry today Debbie. Thank you for all your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and inspiration to continue your poetry. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

May 6, 2011 at 10:43 AM

Excellent!VERY tasty.

James Peranteau

May 6, 2011 at 6:34 AM

;) awesome Debbie ! Have a great weekend....much love, james

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 6, 2011 at 5:53 AM

The only thing I enjoy in the evening visiting a Mall or a store. Debbie

Carolyn Devonshire

May 5, 2011 at 7:51 PM

LOL I only like fries when they're really greasy -- the artery blocking kind. Enjoyed your epulaeryu, Deb. Thanks for your kind words. Best wishes in Gwendolen's contest! Love and blessings, Carolyn

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