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Friendship Metaphore

Each spring, the source of every brook or stream Rises from the land which has perforce been fed By rain that falls on earth the which would seem To return that gift, become a fountainhead And issue in a rich and vital flow That feeds all life to flourish and to grow With this metaphor I seek to realise The interaction of a friendship that I prize Taken from poem: The Fluence of Friendship 28 April 2019 Contest: Rithimus Divisa Poetry

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Date: 5/2/2019 7:25:00 PM
Friendship is indeed precious, rejuvenating like the spring, congratulations on your placement, Geoffrey!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/6/2019 8:30:00 AM
Many thanks, Michelle
Date: 4/28/2019 8:04:00 AM
An awesome write Geoffrey, so descriptive. Good luck in the contest....Maria hugs
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/6/2019 8:28:00 AM
Many thanks, Maria. Good to hear from you again. I think you will know that the inspiration for the original poem was one of familial relationship to you.

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