Friendship Lost

T ogether
 W e were always stronger and the
 O nly two

 P eople in the world that knew how we felt 
 E very second of the day;
 A nd I have yet to find another friend I can 
 S hare all my 

 I nner thoughts with.
 N othing is worse than having to leave the 

 P eople you love behind
 O nly in your mind and heart
 D o they have the chance to live on and
"S pread" their wings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Nieves Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 7:33 PM
Nice acrostic, and belated congrats on your win in the contest.
Moreno Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 11:58 PM
Brandee, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
Jordan Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 6:52 PM
Brandee - Congratulations on placing in Nathan’s “Two Peas in a Pod” contest – God Bless, mj
Mason Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 8:58 AM
Very clever acrostic, Brandee !! Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest!!
Brown Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 3:25 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest Brandee. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 12:01 AM
Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Brandee.Rgds Brian
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 6:17 PM
Congratulations on placing in Nathan’s” Two Peas in a Pod” poetry contest with this clever acrostic poem. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Richards Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 5:44 PM
A different and well done twist on the contest! Congratulations on your honorable mention!! Carrie
Leccese Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 5:14 PM
Congratulations on a Honorable Mention in my contest! Nate.
Chircop Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 1:42 PM
THIS IS SO SWEET AND ORIGINAL--CHARMA
Joseph Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 9:20 AM
awesome. I loved reading this.
Knox Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 2:46 PM
saying goodbye is so hard to do,great poem, thank you for your comment , by the way my friend was sick and died of kidney failure, but life goes on and we just have to stay strong :)
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