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Friendship

Friendship is a thread
Made of trust and affection
Easily breakable

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Poet Destroyer A

July 16, 2012 at 4:10 AM

Jay great haiku, stopping by to say good night~PD

Ravi Sathasivam

July 16, 2012 at 1:32 AM

Well said. But strong friendships, cannot be broken. Tks

Keith Bickerstaffe

July 14, 2012 at 9:34 AM

A marvelous HAIKU, well conceived and rendered! Best wishes, Keith

Jayachandran Chakrapany

July 14, 2012 at 10:06 AM

thank you .jk

Robert Pettit

July 12, 2012 at 2:28 PM

Well said, but you have one too many syllables in your last line. How about replacing "breakable" with "severed"?

Jayachandran Chakrapany

July 13, 2012 at 9:16 AM

thank you .jk

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 12, 2012 at 1:49 PM

Well written haiku, jk - oxox Anne-Lise

Jayachandran Chakrapany

July 13, 2012 at 9:16 AM

thank you .jk

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 11, 2012 at 12:40 PM

It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today JK. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

Jayachandran Chakrapany

July 12, 2012 at 12:45 AM

thank you .jk

Richard Palmer

July 11, 2012 at 10:18 AM

your friend ship is strong,in JA friendships are made from cob-web,lol great write Jayachandran

Jayachandran Chakrapany

July 11, 2012 at 10:22 AM

thank you .jk

Andrea Dietrich

July 11, 2012 at 7:15 AM

I think it is not easily breakable if it is a strong friendship, but you are right about friendships that we often find online, they can be easily breakable! even good friends can sometimes break!

Jayachandran Chakrapany

July 11, 2012 at 7:18 AM

thank you .jk