Friendship

Roses of spring and summer 
are of this world's pleasure;
but true friendship
Last forever and forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Smith Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 11:19 AM
Wow! I really love this piece. You've captured a novel of life in but a few well stated verses.
Caulfield Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Do you really think so? Thanks for your kind comments.
Larison Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 8:18 AM
Wonderful short and good to read. Its amazing what little words we can use and it mean so much
Caulfield Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Usually I am more wordy, but I'm trying to condense with meaning. Thanks for your comments.
Kendrick Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 12:16 PM
Great comparison..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Caulfield Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 12:30 PM
Thank you so much Sara.
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 12:11 PM
So true Peggy, well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
Caulfield Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 12:13 PM
Thanks Anne.
Loving Iii Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 11:23 AM
this is like haiku without the restrictions.
Caulfield Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 12:06 PM
Thank you John. I wasn't sure what it would be exactly. I'm glad you told me. Have a great day.
Christian Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 10:59 AM
aww that is lovley, and so true
Caulfield Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 11:10 AM
Thank you my friend.
Harrell Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 2:27 PM
I think true friendship starts with clicking. You have to click to share. Love, Toquyen
Caulfield Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 2:47 PM
Yes, that does help,
Williams Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 1:47 PM
Peggy you are right, but true friendships are very rare..David
Caulfield Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 2:10 PM
Very true David. Sometimes you think you have a true friend and they knife you in the back. Then you find a very true friend and say you never knew what true friendship was really like.
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 1:33 PM
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!! I love the way you conveyed this message!!!
Caulfield Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 1:38 PM
Thank you my friend. It's very kind of you to say so. Have a good day.
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