Poet Destroyer A Poet Free verse

Friendship

friendship -   ((CONTEST))


**Jun Jun Villanueva**
Friendship~ salient lyrical canzonet of life's vast immeasurable experiences
an intermezzo in an interminable tedious dulcet musical theater
a masterpiece fabricated through hearts' harmonic jibe
excogitate from comradeship's bond and pinky promise
"HYMN" my heart and soul still warbling in oxymoronic spirit.


**Poet Destroyer**
Friendship- stood like a b-sharp note, the best jubilant occasion
My ears a funnel of tease~ something big in the air, waves off your shoulder.
Repetition and codas beyond the ripples of my reflections~ I see you my friend.
Ready to sing and examine the warmth of immeasurable experience.
The ripples you compose inside me, are like the last octaves parrying symbols.


** Tracie Edwards ~ contest **

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 10:51 PM are you going to miss me

Paul Callus February 1, 2016 at 7:44 AM I'm glad I clicked on this poem, Linda. It is a lovely collaboration, and it's a pity that it has been sidestepped for nearly 3 years! It is a beautiful tribute to friendship. ~ Hugs // paul

Justin Bordner March 2, 2013 at 2:07 PM WoW PD., your stanza coincides so perfectly with what I recently wrote about you for the 100% Nature Contest - Mouthpiece of Nature Herself - love how you incorporate all those senses in this intelligence Linda - good friendship should encourage self discovery - J.A.B. %

David Scott November 12, 2012 at 11:22 AM nice write linda did not understand some of fisrst half but get a sense of warth just reading i think you would be a good friend to many xxc davidscott

Len Gasun August 23, 2012 at 10:53 AM Wow!!! wow!!! I love this one soo much again, a perfect collaboration poems of good friends. I love PD's comparison with musical symbols. I absolutely agree! Well, so extremely glad to read your soup-mail. TYSM!! I arrived so late tonight from unexpected appointment and was so busy in school the whole day. Glad to hear from you tonight especially about YOUR BEST COLOR of LOVE for today. I'm pretty sure the family will be so happy and grateful. God will BLESS you!!! Good night here my dear!

Sharon Winter December 27, 2011 at 8:33 AM wow wow wow! just wanted to thank you for your comment and found your poetry to be just amazing! what a treat! all the best to you and yours. happy, healthy holidays! hugs, shar xoxo

John Aaron Green December 3, 2011 at 10:50 AM WOW,,,im speachless,,,are you watching bedlam tonight between ou and osu,,,its on at 7;00 didnt know if you were a football fan or not,,if you like oklahoma teams,,,lol,,,and are you on facebook????

Nathan D. October 27, 2011 at 10:04 AM you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2011 at 3:00 PM Gosh, I think I have seen a lot of these collaborations. I just know there must be a few I missed. Let me hunt some more!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2011 at 10:32 AM Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest P.D. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 20, 2011 at 11:19 AM Sorry our postal system sucks, heehee, I think I would expect it in maybe 2 weeks or so?? Thank you again so much for that in advance & haha! I knew you'd know that chocolate clue was me ;) actually it is sort of true, I have been "tasting" chocolate since last night and dreaming about it, geez, hahaha. Such a tough job, but somebody's gotta do it! ;)

Jack Horne September 16, 2011 at 1:23 PM Many congrats on all your wins, PD : ) And thanks - I enjoyed working with you x

Cory Long September 16, 2011 at 11:13 AM great job congrats on your win..cory

Ryan Emerald September 15, 2011 at 8:33 PM Hey it's me- I'm back... I really love this poem PD it's my kind of tone. -RED

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 15, 2011 at 8:13 PM Congrats PD my BFF for life.. on your wonderful win with this collaboration with jun-jun.. an amazing piece with two special blending of talent luv..your BFF forever...

Gary Fields September 10, 2011 at 3:48 PM Where do you get all of this poetry. This is too extensive for me. I will have to go back to school, in order that I may catch up with youl Sorry I can't make this my favorite poem, because I am partial. You are my favorite girl. I can't keep making you a favorite Poet over and over again. Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS I am missing you. Keep up the fantastic work...Kiss^up.. a little more...... (:-)'s....Man once removed....laugh, laugh, hic-^up!

Daver Austin September 6, 2011 at 4:45 PM b-sharp is the same as c, although c may be a tiny bit higher. Does this mean anything? I thought not. Hey! This tune goes deep. Love, daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 6, 2011 at 10:55 AM Oh wow pd & jun-jun... you sure did great here, this collab is so cool on how it likened your friendship to music-- just dropping by to say hi as well :) how have you been???

Judy Ball September 6, 2011 at 3:45 AM I really like this. A great collaboration between you. Loved it. God Bless, JB Glad you liked the Cowboy's Ten Commandments. That's what struck me too was how it is just worded different from the original. Makes it easier to remember doesn't it. I just loved it when I found it on a wall plaque at the hardware store and bought it. God Bless, JB

John Loving Iii September 2, 2011 at 10:25 PM two hearts kissing at the same time, two hands holding with the same mind. shame and embarrasment not only yours but also mine. this is the love of the same kind. john

Andrea Dietrich September 2, 2011 at 2:52 AM I really LOVE your response to Jun Jun with these fun images you did likening yourself to a song. Keep up you great collaborations! (poor texas girl that has to stand crap humidity and not see a real Autumn. haha)

Lynette Chachere September 2, 2011 at 12:35 AM friendship is precious (: the best thing that could last forever. about what you said with life, love, etc! are you married?? and i know i don't go on as much because i haven't been writing and also im working on finishing school, and a lot of other things have happened too.but maybe ill post again some day soon(: ~Always

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 1, 2011 at 2:43 PM wow a wonderful dissertation in poetry on friendship and it's bond ...PD my BFF .. good luck to u and jun-jun both in this great contest luv...your BFF in bronze array .. from sunny Florida..

Cory Long September 1, 2011 at 11:41 AM nicely done you two good luck in the contest. cory

Paul Beadnall August 31, 2011 at 10:27 PM BOOM IMPECIBLE.. Good luck to you both blessings from Paul

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