Friendship

Ancient barn …
Weathered
Age’s ashen grey
Old friends, long gone…
Except rusted nails
Lonesome ally
Against the wind
This friendship can't be swayed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 7:10 PM
This is a creative way to describe friendship. Imaginative and deep. Nice job
Antwan Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 10:12 PM
this is a clever piece of work. this is exactly how I view friendship. thanks for the comment on my poem.
Foulk Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 1:20 PM
a great piece of poetry.
Eastman Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 1:09 PM
I enjoy reading your work.
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