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my angel my dove the one I loved I wanted to fight but she gave up I made her cry she stood beside I lost my girl so I lost my life the times weren't good the times were rough and the angel in her has had enough a friend like you is a friend I need I hope to god again our paths will meet the time may not be near but never is the word I fear

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Date: 1/6/2014 1:05:00 AM
Hi Joaquin, I would like to extend my hand in welcome to the PoetrySoup community. There’s a lot to learn from each other here and hopefully you will have a great time while at it. I love how smooth flowing your poem is - nice. It's always hard when you are the only one fighting - I love the optimism at the end. Very well written. Feel free to drop me a line when you can. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Vicky.
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Date: 12/24/2013 3:04:00 AM
Joaquin, this is sweet and deep... xox...LINDA
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