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Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/21/2019 6:31:00 PM

Warren, This poem is so true. In friendship's bond...the day is met. -Richard

Warren Doll
Date: 12/9/2019 6:51:00 PM

Richard. thanks for your comment and visit~ Warren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/2/2019 8:34:00 AM

Yes you are right, still a rare combination of both does not disappoint.

Warren Doll
Date: 8/5/2019 10:29:00 AM

Richard, a very rare combination I see your point. I always feel that content is more important than form in a friendship. Have a great day~ Warren

Funom Makama

Date: 7/30/2019 12:39:00 PM

So powerful... The message is as clear as a billboard. Excellent craft and wisdom combined.

Warren Doll
Date: 8/5/2019 10:20:00 AM

Funom, thank you for your wonderful positive comments and visit. All the best~ Warren.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2019 6:07:00 AM

Got that one correct. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Warren Doll
Date: 7/11/2019 1:58:00 PM

Hi Sara, I enjoy reading your poetry. Thanks for your visit~ Warren

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/8/2019 5:39:00 PM

I’d say so...a better friend you might have!

Warren Doll
Date: 7/11/2019 1:56:00 PM

I agree. Great to hear from you, Kim.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/7/2019 4:28:00 PM

Amen

Warren Doll
Date: 7/11/2019 1:55:00 PM

Thanks for your comment and visit, Charmaine.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/7/2019 1:42:00 AM

Awesome monoku! Great job!

Warren Doll
Date: 7/7/2019 3:17:00 PM

J.W., Thanks for your positive comments. Wishing you all the best~ Warren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2019 6:51:00 PM

YES, Love that!

Warren Doll
Date: 7/6/2019 5:40:00 PM

Hi Andrea, thanks for stopping by and commenting. Best wishes~ Warren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2019 9:17:00 AM

Sounds like a plan. Although I must admit I appreciate good form.

Warren Doll
Date: 6/26/2019 10:13:00 AM

Form slowly fades away; while content is more resiient. Thanks for your comment and visit, Richard.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/3/2019 4:09:00 AM

True friends, great ... Kind wishes, Kai

Warren Doll
Date: 6/9/2019 1:00:00 PM

Exactly. Thanks for your kind comments and visit. All the best~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/2/2019 6:26:00 AM

So important in many aspects of life but most especially friends, lovely Monoku! Happy Sunday!!

Warren Doll
Date: 6/2/2019 3:02:00 PM

I absolutely agree with you ,Mike. A happy Sunday to you. Have a great week~ Warren

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/29/2019 10:00:00 PM

excellent Warren

Warren Doll
Date: 6/2/2019 2:58:00 PM

Thanks and I'm glad that you liked it, Allen. All the best ~Warren

Jan Allison

Date: 5/29/2019 1:21:00 PM

wise advice Warren, some folk don't like monoku poems but they are the same length as haiku and many rave over them. I agree its the content of a poem that is important and not its lenght and so often more is less!:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2019 9:18:00 AM

Are you sure you are talking about poetry??.

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/25/2019 8:03:00 AM

A powerful little write...All the best Warren

Warren Doll
Date: 5/28/2019 12:21:00 PM

Hi Arturo, thanks for your positive comment and visit. Best wishes~ Warren

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/25/2019 5:00:00 AM

Never a truer word spoken - well penned Warren. Hugs, Jennifer.

Warren Doll
Date: 5/29/2019 1:06:00 PM

Hi Jennifer, your positive comments and visit are appreciated. All the best~ Warren

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/21/2019 10:30:00 PM

Very true and well done Warren

Warren Doll
Date: 5/24/2019 4:54:00 PM

Allen, thanks so much for your positive comments and visit~ Warren

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 5/21/2019 6:32:00 PM

Contentment comes in Distorted forms

Warren Doll
Date: 5/24/2019 4:52:00 PM

Absolutely! See the true person not the superficial.~ Warren

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/19/2019 9:39:00 AM

Yes Warren. You are right. Well done :)

Warren Doll
Date: 5/24/2019 4:50:00 PM

Heidi, Thanks so much~ Warren

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/18/2019 4:47:00 PM

Good one, Warren. How very true!!

Warren Doll
Date: 5/24/2019 4:49:00 PM

Hi Line, glad that you liked it.~ Warren

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/18/2019 12:43:00 PM

Ah! Love this! I used to try to do all of the forms, but later wondered - why did I chose THAT as my content?

Warren Doll
Date: 5/24/2019 4:48:00 PM

Caren, great insight, All the best~ Warren

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/18/2019 12:14:00 PM

Great advice warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 5/24/2019 4:46:00 PM

Hi Vijay, Thanks for your positive comment~ Warren