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'Baby, you taste like chocolate, You and me we'd make a great rhyming couplet. A.K.A a grinding couplet.' 'You can get on top of me like enjambment.' 'I can show you some wild imagery, Me on you, you on me.' 'Metaphor stands for meet-at-four, We'll get it on till the break of dawn.' 'Damn, could you BE anymore sexual?' -an example of a rhetorical question you could include... 'S-s-s-s-s-SEX!'- an example of sibilance you could use (and probably will). 'Annotate me honey, and together we can achieve a deeper meaning.'

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Date: 5/4/2013 8:05:00 AM
Definately not boring.
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Date: 3/13/2013 6:07:00 AM
A stunning piece of work, truly. I don't want you to get too excited by this but, I genuinely believe this could perhaps go down as one of the most eloquent poetic pieces OF ALL TIME. Congratulations on your mastery of such beautiful imagery.
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