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Friendly Fire

Fearless fire burns outside the friendly line Your one love now must take its final bow Torching the truth the lie now our headline, not stopping for love not even a vow It runs through a marriage a burning plough No skin nor sex can change its evil path Too late to find and set off the alarm Regret and pain the end to its flame wrath, its burning light looks tender and so warm Touching the flame release a love pain storm -Sept 2016-

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Date: 9/25/2016 9:50:00 AM
Dear James, sorry for the late response. Have been remiss in responding of late. Disdain is not an easy format but you have done this one perfectly and with such deep emotion. Great poem my friend. Betty
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Date: 9/11/2016 6:23:00 AM
Wow! I hope this poem is a lie James.
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Date: 9/12/2016 12:02:00 AM
Poetic licence Jean...thanks for the visit!

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