Friend Or Foe

Rain
                                         falls softly
                            Refreshing, watering, reviving.
                          Ponds, streams, rivers, reservoirs
                              Flooding, raging, destroying
                                  Demolishing buildings
                                          Monsoon
 



Penned 7 November 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 8:26 PM
Wow that pleasant rain went south and so fast! Excellent job Seren another winner.
Roberts Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 10:17 PM
Nope you were wrong, not in list...Seren
Roberts Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 9:42 PM
Well had to do opposites
Smith Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 2:58 PM
Excellent Seren...I love the two sides of a storm...hugs Tim
Roberts Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 8:41 PM
Thx Tim, didnt know what to write about.....Seren
Allison Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 5:36 AM
love the contrasts Seren excellently penned good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 8:42 PM
Thanks Jan .....Seren
Chircop Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 3:17 AM
An excellent diamante Serena..Lovely!Charma
Roberts Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 8:44 PM
Thanks Charmaine, found it hard to keep shape. ...Seren
A. Sharma Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 2:49 AM
Brilliant ideas and superb write Seren! gl in contest!
Roberts Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 8:45 PM
Thank you .......Seren
Roberts Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 2:42 AM
Cant get this to get right shape . Have tried all ways Help any ideas....Seren
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