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Friend Did Let Me Down

Amidst the conversations of people Trying to negotiate on human grounds Could not see my friend hurted deeper What? The after event left me astound Asking my stabbed soul now and again What was my mistake if I really cared It was not any stunt of personal gain Friend turned enemy for her I dared The wounds are grave whom to tell World spotted with so ruthless beings For I protected the immoral acts spell Friend left walked alone for her things Let down forever that trust decayed Learning need to be taken for a wise Love self first not emotionally frayed Thanks friend for guiding light…true lies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/11/2012 8:10:00 AM
nicely written
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Date: 12/1/2011 7:09:00 PM
Sneha, beautiful Rhyme dear. Congratulations on your first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:05:00 PM
Very well-written. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/1/2011 9:19:00 AM
A well written poem on betrayal. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/1/2011 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Letdown contest Sneha
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Sneha. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol
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