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Friend

Friend
Comforting familiarity
Lasting a lifetime
Yet even lifetimes end
Memories

Memories
Laughing uncontrollably
We should not
That makes it funnier 
Hilarity

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Date: 1/27/2025 5:22:00 AM
true lines dear poet. lovely.
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David Crandall
Date: 1/27/2025 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Thriveni!
Date: 1/26/2025 7:31:00 AM
David, I appreciate your support for my Flash Poetry Challenge (8). Your poem was randomly chosen to be featured in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. Your line "Yet even lifetimes end memories" resonates with me. I love the second Elfchen's positive finish with "Hilarity." :-)
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David Crandall
Date: 1/26/2025 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Mark, I enjoyed this one!
Date: 1/20/2025 6:44:00 PM
Freedom to laugh with a friend is fun. Just don't laugh at them.
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David Crandall
Date: 1/20/2025 6:53:00 PM
haha, good point!
Date: 1/20/2025 11:01:00 AM
That just about wraps up what true friendship really is. Nice write, David.
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David Crandall
Date: 1/20/2025 12:07:00 PM
Thanks Charles!
Date: 1/19/2025 11:30:00 PM
Hilarity was a great end word. I enjoyed this.
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David Crandall
Date: 1/20/2025 8:42:00 AM
Thanks, glad you liked it!
Date: 1/19/2025 7:49:00 PM
Superb! So enjoyable
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David Crandall
Date: 1/19/2025 9:24:00 PM
Thanks, Unseeking seeker!

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