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Quickly fading
Deeper and deeper
It fell out of my grasp
Seeped through my fingers
Unable to keep it
I arrogantly lost it
Saddest of all
I didn't realize it was gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/6/2009 8:47:00 PM
i can feel your loss. great description!
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Date: 3/28/2009 7:07:00 PM
A sad but profound statement on loss friendship, Gavin. Nice work!
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