Friend?

Quickly fading
Deeper and deeper
It fell out of my grasp
Seeped through my fingers
Unable to keep it
I arrogantly lost it
Saddest of all
I didn't realize it was gone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 6, 2009 at 8:47 PM
i can feel your loss. great description!
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March 28, 2009 at 7:07 PM
A sad but profound statement on loss friendship, Gavin. Nice work!
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