Fried Freddy

He came home fried.
His wife cried “Fred,
you tied one on!”

Fred fell indoors,
on all fours and
now snores soundly.

The moral here:
drink one beer and
stay near to dear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 6:18 PM
very cleaver, and so creative.
Guzzi Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 2:09 PM
Had not seen this form before thanks so much for the entry! Light & Love
Neels Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 9:30 PM
Witty write Robert, I enjoyed it.. ;) I tried this form once a few months ago.. Can't even remember what mine was called but I love yours.. hopefully Freddy listens to your advise lol.. love Wilma
Poet Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 9:26 PM
Njce humour here...enjoyed.
Gorelick Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 9:17 PM
We dont see this form often.. Ive never written one. Ienjoyed your clever piece. well done. BG
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