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Fried Freddy

He came home fried. His wife cried “Fred, you tied one on!” Fred fell indoors, on all fours and now snores soundly. The moral here: drink one beer and stay near to dear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/10/2011 6:18:00 PM
very cleaver, and so creative.
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Date: 5/30/2011 2:09:00 PM
Had not seen this form before thanks so much for the entry! Light & Love
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Date: 5/29/2011 9:30:00 PM
Witty write Robert, I enjoyed it.. ;) I tried this form once a few months ago.. Can't even remember what mine was called but I love yours.. hopefully Freddy listens to your advise lol.. love Wilma
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Date: 5/28/2011 9:26:00 PM
Njce humour here...enjoyed.
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Date: 5/28/2011 9:17:00 PM
We dont see this form often.. Ive never written one. Ienjoyed your clever piece. well done. BG
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