Friday Thirteen --Paris Attacks

Yes, they too believed in love,
Yet became victims of hate,
Men hungry for destruction,
And with vicious mindset,
	Fired deadly bullets around,
	Lifeless bodies fell on ground.

Pain touched every heart,
For some, life won't be same,
Laughter transformed to cries,
Happiness changed to grief,
	Merciless sinners did it all,
	At concert, café and football.

Flesh and blood piled on roads,
Obedient bodies stayed silent,
Many were counted dead,
Others were counted wounded,
	And some waited for last breath,
	Paris mourned the gruesome death.



written on 17 November, 2015.
Any Poem Meaningful To You - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Broken Wings
(Received FIRST PLACE in the above contest)
Contest Judged on:  20 April, 2016.

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Sponsored by: Laura Loo
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Fenn Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 10:58 PM
Wow Meenakshi! Well written. You portray the feelings of shock and sorrow we all felt that day. Great anti-hate poem.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 12:17 AM
Congrats Meenakshi on your win. Sad what happened in Paris...it could be any country...hatred has no limit, unfortunately...
Scars Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 2:32 PM
Meenakshi, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Chansarkar Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Beautifully written Meenakshi!
Smith Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Sadly well done Meenakshi, congrats..
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 7:42 PM
Congrats on your win Meenakshi with this poignant and well-written reminder of a tragedy that must not be forgotten. Cheers, Brian
Devnath  Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Very sad scene. Congrats on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Raina Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Thanks BL...
Scars Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Meenakshi, congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo
Raina Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Thank you Laura...
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