Fretful Wind

Wind trembles with premonition of a gold leaf's demise, throughout Indian summer's procrastination
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Submitted for Kim Merryman's Contest: Shadorma Style
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ellison Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 9:37 AM
Unfortunately this heralds the end of an amazing summer up here... sad to see it go but welcome the dazzling fall spectacles! Good luck Carrie! Love and warm wishes, Jack
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September 1, 2012 at 10:42 AM
CARRIE, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD
Kendrick Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 2:57 PM
Ahhh!I really like this one..Your creativity is excellent..Congrats on your win..Sara
Cayton Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 12:51 PM
You have done well with the imagery in such a short form as this. You rock and you know it!!! ;) Cindy Lu aka Lucinda... congrats! Take care and God bless you Carrie~
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 6:40 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Merryman Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 8:40 PM
Beautiful imagery, Carrie! Thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim
Collins Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Hi Carrie Just perfect. I love the way you positioned the words. Kathy
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 10:48 PM
WOW another amazing one. I've seen several so far. Love it.
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