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Fretful Wind

Wind trembles with premonition of a gold leaf's demise, throughout Indian summer's procrastination
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Submitted for Kim Merryman's Contest: Shadorma Style

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/4/2012 9:37:00 AM
Unfortunately this heralds the end of an amazing summer up here... sad to see it go but welcome the dazzling fall spectacles! Good luck Carrie! Love and warm wishes, Jack
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Date: 9/1/2012 10:42:00 AM
CARRIE, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD
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Date: 8/31/2012 2:57:00 PM
Ahhh!I really like this one..Your creativity is excellent..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/31/2012 12:51:00 PM
You have done well with the imagery in such a short form as this. You rock and you know it!!! ;) Cindy Lu aka Lucinda... congrats! Take care and God bless you Carrie~
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Date: 8/30/2012 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2012 8:40:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Carrie! Thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/26/2012 11:02:00 AM
Hi Carrie Just perfect. I love the way you positioned the words. Kathy
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Date: 8/23/2012 10:48:00 PM
WOW another amazing one. I've seen several so far. Love it.
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