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Freshly Fallen Flakes

Freshly fallen flakes coat the land
and everything in sight. 
Suddenly, Nature seems so bland,
when whitewashed white on white.

Color change completed
Autumn has retreated:
its pallet: depleted.

A clean canvas takes
freshly fallen flakes.

Copyright © Emile Pinet | Year Posted 2021

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James Marshall Goff Date: 1/28/2022 1:00:00 PM Beautiful scene, finely crafted Emile! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 1/28/2022 2:41:00 PM Thanks, James, your comments are much appreciated, my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex Date: 1/28/2022 12:33:00 AM "Freshly fallen flakes frost" - beautiful alliteration! A beautifully written rhyme. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 1/28/2022 7:34:00 AM Thanks, Christuraj, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.

David Mchattie Date: 12/19/2021 3:33:00 PM I love the whiteness of winter after a dreary autumn. Everything looks so clean. A wonderful poem my friend. Have a great day. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 12/19/2021 4:09:00 PM Thanks, David, you have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 12/19/2021 1:57:00 PM This form is exalted with your talented pen Emile. I loved this! I am certain he will too. Mele Kalikimaka my friend. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 12/19/2021 3:19:00 PM Thanks, Connie, you honor me, and I much appreciate it my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins Date: 12/19/2021 12:19:00 PM Rich imagery and brimming with meaning. I love this one, Emile...an excellent Quietus! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 12/19/2021 3:18:00 PM Thanks, Milt, you always bring a smile to my heart my friend, Emile.