Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

Freshly Fallen Flakes

Freshly fallen flakes coat the land
and everything in sight. 
Suddenly, Nature seems so bland,
when whitewashed white on white.

Color change completed
Autumn has retreated:
its pallet: depleted.

A clean canvas takes
freshly fallen flakes.

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James Marshall Goff January 28, 2022 at 1:00 PM Beautiful scene, finely crafted Emile! Emile Pinet January 28, 2022 at 2:41 PM Thanks, James, your comments are much appreciated, my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex January 28, 2022 at 12:33 AM "Freshly fallen flakes frost" - beautiful alliteration! A beautifully written rhyme. Emile Pinet January 28, 2022 at 7:34 AM Thanks, Christuraj, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.

David Mchattie December 19, 2021 at 3:33 PM I love the whiteness of winter after a dreary autumn. Everything looks so clean. A wonderful poem my friend. Have a great day. Emile Pinet December 19, 2021 at 4:09 PM Thanks, David, you have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong December 19, 2021 at 1:57 PM This form is exalted with your talented pen Emile. I loved this! I am certain he will too. Mele Kalikimaka my friend. Blessings xxoo Emile Pinet December 19, 2021 at 3:19 PM Thanks, Connie, you honor me, and I much appreciate it my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins December 19, 2021 at 12:19 PM Rich imagery and brimming with meaning. I love this one, Emile...an excellent Quietus! Emile Pinet December 19, 2021 at 3:18 PM Thanks, Milt, you always bring a smile to my heart my friend, Emile.