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Freshly fallen flakes bleach the land and everything in sight. Suddenly, Nature seems so bland, when whitewashed white on white. Color change completed Autumn has retreated; its pallet depleted. A blank canvas takes freshly fallen flakes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/28/2022 1:00:00 PM
Beautiful scene, finely crafted Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/28/2022 2:41:00 PM
Thanks, James, your comments are much appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/28/2022 12:33:00 AM
"Freshly fallen flakes frost" - beautiful alliteration! A beautifully written rhyme.
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Date: 1/28/2022 7:34:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/19/2021 3:33:00 PM
I love the whiteness of winter after a dreary autumn. Everything looks so clean. A wonderful poem my friend. Have a great day.
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Date: 12/19/2021 4:09:00 PM
Thanks, David, you have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/19/2021 1:57:00 PM
This form is exalted with your talented pen Emile. I loved this! I am certain he will too. Mele Kalikimaka my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 12/19/2021 3:19:00 PM
Thanks, Connie, you honor me, and I much appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/19/2021 12:19:00 PM
Rich imagery and brimming with meaning. I love this one, Emile...an excellent Quietus!
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Date: 12/19/2021 3:18:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, you always bring a smile to my heart my friend, Emile.

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