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'fresh Spring'

fresh spring
cascading down
exposed skin awakened
invigorating my senses
water


Contest name: "Wow me in five lines"

20/04/2011

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lifenaturecinquain

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 26, 2011 at 8:15 AM

Congratulations on your win Wilma in Francine's contest. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

April 25, 2011 at 1:33 PM

Absolutely Beautiful!!!!!!! the form the feeling and the Poet... Love Michael

Jack Horne

April 24, 2011 at 8:49 AM

many congrats : )

Carrie Richards

April 24, 2011 at 8:16 AM

Cinquains are hard to capture .... you have done this beautifully!! Congratulations, Wilma!!!

Andrea Dietrich

April 24, 2011 at 12:16 AM

congratulations, Wilma. I'm so tired now my eyes are crossing, but I think I have two more to see and I'm outta here!!!

John Freeman

April 23, 2011 at 9:58 PM

Great to see you in the winner's circle Wilma. Congratulations on your honored place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 23, 2011 at 9:22 PM

Congrats Wilma on your HM in Francine's contest ..wowing her with these great words ... enjoy your honor as u celebrate the joy of Easter Sunday luv..

Joyce Johnson

April 23, 2011 at 7:28 PM

Very pretty lines Wilma. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Francine Roberts

April 23, 2011 at 6:25 PM

congrats Wilma on your HM in the contest with this wonderful cinquain

Poet Destroyer A

April 21, 2011 at 5:51 PM

I'm gonna wow! you 5 times.. wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! love it... p.d.

Sara Kendrick

April 21, 2011 at 6:00 AM

Reads like a winning wow...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

April 21, 2011 at 12:17 AM

I am being wowed by so many poems using the word spring, I can see myself easily not making a spot in this contest! This one has GOT to get a place. YOu did wonderfully, wilma.

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 20, 2011 at 6:05 PM

Lovely feelings under those waters, Wilma

Nette Onclaud

April 20, 2011 at 1:29 PM

whoo, wilmsy... a splendid romp od a piece for spring.. i did a cinquain too! great vibes, huh?.. best winning wishes to yuo!! :) huggs, nette

James Foulk

April 20, 2011 at 12:32 PM

you wowed me in five lines, this was great, such writing, so creative, really enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Sweet Erika and she has not seen it yet, but hope to give her a copy this weekend.

Carolyn Devonshire

April 20, 2011 at 10:39 AM

Wow! It must be wonderful to feel those fresh water drops beneath a waterfall, Wilma. Super entry for Francine's contest. Sending winning wishes your way! Love, Carolyn

Desiree M

April 20, 2011 at 9:51 AM

Very nicely crafted. Love it

Kash Poet

April 20, 2011 at 7:35 AM

Another little gem from you Wilma!Best wishes.Visit my SECRET poem:)

Carrie Richards

April 20, 2011 at 7:21 AM

beautiful !!!! I felt refreshed!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 20, 2011 at 6:39 AM

How utterly refreshing Wilma.. good luck int he contest ..nice use of spring.. I also used the water reference .. we both luv water ..how cool.. wishing u a lovely ..blessed..and Happy Easter my friend...

'fresh Spring'

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