Fresh Shasta Daisy

. Fresh Shasta Daisy White white cool gown yellow crown.. First at summer's ball

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Ashley Plotczyk

Date: 6/12/2011 7:02:00 PM

Nicely written. I'm glad you found the art of uniqueness. Keep writting :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/19/2011 7:30:00 AM

my daisies have played out....they were so beautiful though. some cat broke off my lillies and dug up my brocoli and canna lilly. If I catch him he will pay.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2011 5:21:00 AM

Stopping by this morning to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry very much Sara. I want to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. May the sun always shine upon you and bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 5/17/2011 2:26:00 PM

Must look up this flower Sara, it sounds lovely and pretty. It's a beautiful poem....:)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/16/2011 9:00:00 AM

Love Shasta Daisies and they certainly do appear to be wearing a crown! Nice idea. Okay-now come up with a pairing haiku about Coneflowers-my favorite I wrote about in Montage Meltdown contest. (My poem was not liked very well by the judge...I loved it personally). In that poem, I referred to my favorite variety of a coneflower called a Fragrant Angel. That would be an awesome Haiku flower for a writer such as YOU! Your work is amazing, Sara. We have the best writers on the soup! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2011 1:24:00 AM

One of your best flower poems yet, Sara. Love the personification!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2011 11:44:00 PM

Sara, a wonderful poem,, , thanks for this wonderful haiku ;-)sure enjoyed! take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2011 8:01:00 PM

oh so lovely and oh so sweetly written Sara.. a beautiful vision of this white and yellow daisy .. should be first at the summer's ball.. super one..my friend.. happy Sunday...

James Foulk

Date: 5/14/2011 7:36:00 PM

this was a great creative piece of Haiku, enjoyed reading it.

Cory Long

Date: 5/14/2011 4:52:00 PM

this has a nice ring to it, short and sweet to the point. I liked it.. cory