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Fresh Shasta Daisy

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                                                Fresh Shasta Daisy
                                    White white cool gown yellow crown..
                                             First at summer's ball

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Ashley Plotczyk

June 12, 2011 at 7:02 PM

Nicely written. I'm glad you found the art of uniqueness. Keep writting :)

Doris Culverhouse

May 19, 2011 at 7:30 AM

my daisies have played out....they were so beautiful though. some cat broke off my lillies and dug up my brocoli and canna lilly. If I catch him he will pay.

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 19, 2011 at 5:21 AM

Stopping by this morning to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry very much Sara. I want to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. May the sun always shine upon you and bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol

James Fraser

May 17, 2011 at 2:26 PM

Must look up this flower Sara, it sounds lovely and pretty. It's a beautiful poem....:)

Gwendolen Song

May 16, 2011 at 9:00 AM

Love Shasta Daisies and they certainly do appear to be wearing a crown! Nice idea. Okay-now come up with a pairing haiku about Coneflowers-my favorite I wrote about in Montage Meltdown contest. (My poem was not liked very well by the judge...I loved it personally). In that poem, I referred to my favorite variety of a coneflower called a Fragrant Angel. That would be an awesome Haiku flower for a writer such as YOU! Your work is amazing, Sara. We have the best writers on the soup! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

May 15, 2011 at 1:24 AM

One of your best flower poems yet, Sara. Love the personification!

Poet Destroyer A

May 14, 2011 at 11:44 PM

Sara, a wonderful poem,, , thanks for this wonderful haiku ;-)sure enjoyed! take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 14, 2011 at 8:01 PM

oh so lovely and oh so sweetly written Sara.. a beautiful vision of this white and yellow daisy .. should be first at the summer's ball.. super one..my friend.. happy Sunday...