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Fresh Refreshed Light

The dawn comes each day
Barefoot outside my window
With fresh refreshed light

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Skat A

May 23, 2015 at 11:13 AM

ANOTHER STUNNING HAIKU

Jacque Graham

November 17, 2011 at 6:23 PM

It's so... well, Fresh! Loved it. :) It makes me think of running barefoot outside before the sun is all the way up. The air is so clean, feels amazing. You should try it sometime.

Jim Wilson

November 11, 2011 at 8:39 AM

Interesting use of metaphor; the dawn as 'barefoot' is a great image, but Line 2 could also mean someone standing barefoot. At least I read it both ways. I also liked the 'fresh refreshed' usage. Thanks.