Fresh Pulp

fresh pulp of orange
score slice peel from bitter rind
— eyes and nose sweet sip

3/12/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Adams Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 2:31 PM
Made me think of a daiquiri! Wait, I was already thinking of a daiquiri! Anyway, thanks for this, very nice.....80)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 2:50 PM
LOL! Thanks! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 10:36 AM
orange, bitter, and sweet gives me three things I love in a drink. I can so taste this! Thank you, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Thanks, Caren! :)
DiMino Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 11:27 PM
Very nice. A beautiful moment in time captured perfectly.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 6:01 AM
Thanks, Joe!
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