Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Haiku

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Fresh Night

while full blooms quiver
cool waves are pounding the rocks
stars are in her eyes

backwards and forwards
the wind wanders everywhere
bringing far off scents

small splashy puddles
remnants of a rainy noon
moisture in the air

he catches her eye
then he smiles at her and winks
a spring flirtation

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Victor Buhagiar October 18, 2021 at 1:02 AM Four brilliant haikus. Loved the way you inserted a bit of romance. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 18, 2021 at 2:39 PM You have my deep thanks for your appreciation. :)

Sotto Poet October 17, 2021 at 5:29 PM Excellently constructed, Evelyn, your haikus are lovely, the topic is appealing, and the overall look is superb; your excellent phrasing adds to the radiance of this artwork. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 17, 2021 at 8:38 PM Thank you for your lovely, generous comment, Lasaad. I hope you have a wonderful week, Evelyn