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Fresh Coat of Paint

There will be times that are gloomy
cloud covered in grey
when days are looking dingy
nothings going your way.

Do you rise to the occasion
or fold under the weight
feels like walls are closing in
a psychological state.

Break free from the darkness
and the joy that it taints
better days shall appear
like a fresh coat of paint.

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Deb M

Date: 8/21/2025 3:48:00 AM

Absolutely love this Mark….flows beautifully with an uplifting positive message indeed! Debx

Mark Hughes
Date: 8/21/2025 7:35:00 AM

Thanks Deb, I appreciate your visit and comments!!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/20/2025 4:36:00 PM

I deeply appreciate the 'fresh coat of paint' metaphor. I think that image is one many can relate to. Your poem was perfectly human & I enjoyed it, wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Mark Hughes
Date: 8/20/2025 4:43:00 PM

Thank so much Sara, and your insightful commentary!