Fresh and Clean

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First pub 2012.

I love the way she smells after a shower so fragrant fresh and clean and how she sits there so beautiful in her dressing gown brushing her long wet hair until it dry's and gleams. Her sweet perfume fills the room and sets my heart on fire heightening my senses and filling me with desire. Peter Dome.copyright.2012.

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Robin Davis

Date: 12/23/2013 10:18:00 PM

Peter Such a heartwarming and passionate write. Full of love and desire. Your emotions poured from your heart and soul. Nice job

Peter Dome
Date: 12/24/2013 1:25:00 AM

Loved your poem. So much wisdom in tour words. A fav for me. thank you for sharing. take care. Pete.

Peter Dome
Date: 12/24/2013 1:22:00 AM

Hi Robin. so glad you enjoyed my poem. thank you very much.. I really appreciate your kindness. take care. best wishes. Pete.

Robin Davis
Date: 12/23/2013 10:21:00 PM

Thanks for the awesome comment on my Hidden Strength poem