Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Fresh Air

the house filled with emptiness
surging sea of memories
cascading down the stairs
decorating chandeliers
speckled dust - eyewitnesses
letting in fresh air
yes — it has giggles
footprints everywhere
repeat often

1/20/2020<

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Demetrios Trifiatis January 21, 2020 at 5:10 AM Witty and creative dearest, Kim! Liked it! Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2020 at 6:32 AM Thank you, my friend!

Laura Leiser January 20, 2020 at 11:06 PM So beautiful and creative, Kim! Loved this one!! :) Kim Rodrigues January 20, 2020 at 11:13 PM Thank you, Laura! Hugs...Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2020 at 2:08 PM - Empty houses accommodate a lot ... not only fresh air - Great written, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues January 20, 2020 at 2:10 PM The giggles are the grandkids...can’t keep the house quiet for too long!

Silent One January 20, 2020 at 2:07 PM So there is only fresh air when house is empty? Lol Silent One January 20, 2020 at 2:34 PM Yes and when they are not there... The house is empty :) Kim Rodrigues January 20, 2020 at 2:09 PM In other words, the grandkids are the fresh air...let them in, make more memories!

Gershon Wolf January 20, 2020 at 1:34 PM Giggles and footprints. Sigh. The stuff of real memories. By all means, let them in! Remarkable write, Kim! Superb. Warm wishes, Gershon Kim Rodrigues January 20, 2020 at 1:50 PM You always bless me! Thank you <3 Kim