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Fresh Air

the house filled with emptiness surging sea of memories cascading down the stairs decorating chandeliers speckled dust - eyewitnesses letting in fresh air yes — it has giggles footprints everywhere repeat often 1/20/2020<

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/21/2020 5:10:00 AM

Witty and creative dearest, Kim! Liked it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2020 6:32:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/20/2020 11:06:00 PM

So beautiful and creative, Kim! Loved this one!! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2020 11:13:00 PM

Thank you, Laura! Hugs...Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/20/2020 2:08:00 PM

- Empty houses accommodate a lot ... not only fresh air - Great written, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2020 2:10:00 PM

The giggles are the grandkids...can’t keep the house quiet for too long!

Silent One

Date: 1/20/2020 2:07:00 PM

So there is only fresh air when house is empty? Lol

Silent One
Date: 1/20/2020 2:34:00 PM

Yes and when they are not there... The house is empty :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2020 2:09:00 PM

In other words, the grandkids are the fresh air...let them in, make more memories!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/20/2020 1:34:00 PM

Giggles and footprints. Sigh. The stuff of real memories. By all means, let them in! Remarkable write, Kim! Superb. Warm wishes, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2020 1:50:00 PM

You always bless me! Thank you <3 Kim