Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

Freezing - Melting

Freezing
       snow atop the majestic mountain peaks that tower above me
        will soon (as springtime in Happy Valley turns into summer) be
                                                                                                Melting

April 12, 2020 for Let The Pens Flow - Antonym Poetry Contest
Sponsored by  Jenish Somadas

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Jc Hawkens April 18, 2020 at 7:20 AM I came back to offer my Congratulations on your win. This is a lovely poem. Thank you for your visit and beautiful comment on my new poem.

Janice Canerdy April 16, 2020 at 7:04 PM CONGRATS on your win with this lovely, vividly descriptive poem, Andrea. Janice

Paula Goldsmith April 15, 2020 at 3:02 PM Congratulations on your win. No more Freezing and Melting for Spring is here with birds singing. Enjoy your win and day.............

Howard Kerr April 15, 2020 at 2:11 PM Congratulations on win, Andrea. I love the contrasts on this peerless poem. Howard

Jenish Somadas April 15, 2020 at 1:36 PM Wonderful imagery.. Congrats on your great win Andrea..

Mystic Rose Rose April 14, 2020 at 5:35 PM Just stopping by to say hello again, Sometimes our fathers are heroes sometimes its mom, sometimes sisters , glad you were close to your mom and sister, love to you xo

Judy Ball April 14, 2020 at 5:30 AM Ah Spring. Right now it melts and then it snows and then it melts some more. Have to watch your step that you don't slip in the mud or ice. Still it's a great time of year because the trees and plants are beginning to wake and I will have my garden back soon. A nice piece. God Bless, JB

Gideon Foli April 14, 2020 at 3:35 AM You're a great and creative writer. You inspire me a lot. Keep them coming my dear friend. Love and hugs!!!

Quoth Theraven April 13, 2020 at 9:50 PM Andrea, Happy Valley, in the shadow of frozen peaks thaw. This has such a nice ring to it. I like the contrast. -Richard

David Mchattie April 13, 2020 at 9:03 PM We still have a foot of snow in Saskatchewan and will receive more tomorrow so I await our long overdue spring. Stay well my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos April 13, 2020 at 2:07 PM Breathtaking verse my friend - best of luck. Blessings, Jennifer.

Cecilia Macfarlane April 13, 2020 at 12:17 PM Good one Andrea. Hugs

Jc Hawkens April 13, 2020 at 11:13 AM Beautiful antonym, Andrea good luck in the contest. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens

Vijay Pandit April 13, 2020 at 8:00 AM Wonderfully done, Andrea. A winning poem you wrote.

Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2020 at 7:55 AM A lovely antonym! I can hear the trickling of the water as it melts for Spring :) <3 Kim

Mystic Rose Rose April 13, 2020 at 6:34 AM I hope you had a healthy and peaceful Easter my friend, its nice to read your poetry once again, Be well and stay safe. xo

John Watt April 12, 2020 at 10:48 PM We love our summer, don't we? I like how you put the antonyms at the far left and right, it makes sense that they are separated, right? Clever. GL to you.

JC Brul April 12, 2020 at 9:27 PM Ahhh to bid adieu to winter!.. Magnificent! To my faves.

Harry Horsman April 12, 2020 at 9:22 PM Yes nature and the seasons march on Andrea, Somehow, what you have written here, is so meaningful.,Please Stay safe, these are trying times...

Tom Cunningham April 12, 2020 at 8:33 PM The joys of spring can't come quick enough. Tom

Arturo Michael April 12, 2020 at 7:41 PM And that is a beautiful promise to come...Nice one Andrea...Happy Easter to you and yours

Eve Roper April 12, 2020 at 4:33 PM Well done, Andrea, Good luck. Have a wonderful Happy Easter to you and your family. Hugs Eve