Freezing Cold

Winter’s always cold
The air a brisk freezing temp
Has a heartless feel
Like that of a lost
Relationship that’s gone by
Piercing the sore pride

Russell Sivey

lifelost loveseasonschoka

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Don Johnson

September 20, 2011 at 11:15 PM

if ya hoss runs off n leaves ya, if it wont come back thats right, hit it over th ass with the bridle, till it runs right outa sight, cos ya bound to catch a new one, if ya cast the rope just right, to saddle up n mount n ride, all through the summer night... catch a new horse or shiela hey:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 20, 2011 at 11:18 AM

I agree.. a heartless feel .. Winter is so glum to me ..I am a Summer baby and Winter makes me rather sad.. except for holidays of course.. nice analogies in this piece Russell...

Gwendolen Song

September 20, 2011 at 11:12 AM

Oh...feeling the bruises of my sore pride....what a reflection of my past! Another wonderful choka...You are good at intertwining nature with life's lessons here! All the best to you, RUZZZELL. hahha. Sorry I speellled your name wrong two!! lol. Gwebdolen :)

Andrea Dietrich

September 19, 2011 at 11:49 PM

cold weather AND relationships. Two good topics to compare, Russell. and they are both NO fun! (by the way, I totally made up that mermaid sonnet. It was implying sexual abuse of the child and my kids were never abused by anyone. Most of my poetry is fictional. But some are true!)