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Freeze the Moment

Pounding of the sun. Pounding of the storm. Drummers on trees. Freeze the moment Of unusuality. Stream of arousal. Stream of hot rays. Stunning silence. Freeze the moment Of tranquility. Heed transient thunder. Heed, it’s late arrival. Wringing out rain. Freeze the moment Of instability. 8/29/2021

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Date: 8/30/2021 1:04:00 AM
Very original, Kim. Loved the imagery. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2021 5:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear one!
Date: 8/29/2021 11:10:00 AM
Superbly done, Kim. Enjoyed the way you articulated the moment. moment of un-usuality--great word choice.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2021 11:13:00 AM
We had an unusual storm here! Thank you, my friend!

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