Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Freeze the Moment

Pounding of the sun.
Pounding of the storm.
Drummers on trees.
Freeze the moment
Of unusuality.

Stream of arousal.
Stream of hot rays.
Stunning silence.
Freeze the moment
Of tranquility.

Heed transient thunder.
Heed, it’s late arrival.
Wringing out rain.
Freeze the moment
Of instability.

8/29/2021

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Victor Buhagiar August 30, 2021 at 1:04 AM Very original, Kim. Loved the imagery. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues August 30, 2021 at 5:37 AM Thank you so much, dear one!

Vijay Pandit August 29, 2021 at 11:10 AM Superbly done, Kim. Enjoyed the way you articulated the moment. moment of un-usuality--great word choice. Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2021 at 11:13 AM We had an unusual storm here! Thank you, my friend!