Freewill

Who are you? You ask you. You ask you. Who you are. You are who. You choose to be. You choose to be. Who you are. Who am I? I ask me. I ask me. Who I am. I am who. I choose to be. I choose to be. Who I am.

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Olumuyiwa Onaf

Date: 7/27/2017 8:32:00 PM

But are we really allowed to choose our Destiny??? It's a question on my mind....

Holly Bohto
Date: 7/28/2017 8:24:00 AM

It's like that song lyric. Destiny is always on my mind. Destiny unfolds like toppling dominos by the path that we chose in front of the other.

Adeyemi Joshua

Date: 7/27/2017 12:33:00 PM

Choose well to live well. Nice one!

Holly Bohto
Date: 7/28/2017 8:25:00 AM

Thank you. I concur.

Christy Stover

Date: 11/6/2016 9:56:00 PM

That is what everything ultimately comes down to.

Holly Bohto
Date: 11/6/2016 10:03:00 PM

We know it. Healing is the ultimate choice..Thanks Christy

Chris Green

Date: 11/6/2016 7:00:00 AM

Now that's the way to write it. :) I really enjoyed how you did that. It was so simple in design but very complex in it's message. Bravo Holly

Holly Bohto
Date: 11/6/2016 8:06:00 AM

This was playful and fun to write. Thank you. Chris.