Freewill

Who are you? You ask you.
You ask you.  Who you are.

You are who. You choose to be.
You choose to be. Who you are.

Who am I?  I ask me.
I ask me. Who I am.

I am who. I choose to be.
I choose to be. Who I am.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onaf Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 8:32 PM
But are we really allowed to choose our Destiny??? It's a question on my mind....
Bohto Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 8:24 AM
It's like that song lyric. Destiny is always on my mind. Destiny unfolds like toppling dominos by the path that we chose in front of the other.
Joshua Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 12:33 PM
Choose well to live well. Nice one!
Bohto Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 8:25 AM
Thank you. I concur.
Stover Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:56 PM
That is what everything ultimately comes down to.
Bohto Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 10:03 PM
We know it. Healing is the ultimate choice..Thanks Christy
Green Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 7:00 AM
Now that's the way to write it. :) I really enjoyed how you did that. It was so simple in design but very complex in it's message. Bravo Holly
Bohto Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 8:06 AM
This was playful and fun to write. Thank you. Chris.
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