Freesia

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Dainty Freesia clings on stem, leaf by leaf
adorning July a lush motif
to weave  grandeur through the night
when bold scents invite--
rich display
of curls,
mauve, blue-gray:
Fields soak in her charm
as bell-like outlines disarm
one summer’s thrilled nearness, its rebirth
enchanting my heart in this landscape of mirth.


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Written 7/2/2019
Contest of Dear Heart: Writing Challenge 2, 
June 2019 - A Summer Flower- 
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Checked via www.howmanysyllables.com

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Len Gasun

Date: 7/17/2019 8:42:00 AM

Dazzling rhyme poem for a pretty flower my dear friend, Nette with a fantastic form, too. My profound thanks for your visit on my simple work last time. Sorry for a very late reply. I stopped writing for a while. I'm still in Bkk, always super busy. Now, I'm still struggling to find time to go back to my #1 hobby, poetry. Hope you're doing well, healthy and safe always. Miss you. Btw, Congrats on this amazing write and win. I read other poems of yours too. love and hugs