Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

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Freesia

Dainty Freesia clings on stem, leaf by leaf
adorning July a lush motif
to weave  grandeur through the night
when bold scents invite--
rich display
of curls,
mauve, blue-gray:
Fields soak in her charm
as bell-like outlines disarm
one summer’s thrilled nearness, its rebirth
enchanting my heart in this landscape of mirth.


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Written 7/2/2019
Contest of Dear Heart: Writing Challenge 2, 
June 2019 - A Summer Flower- 
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Len Gasun July 17, 2019 at 8:42 AM Dazzling rhyme poem for a pretty flower my dear friend, Nette with a fantastic form, too. My profound thanks for your visit on my simple work last time. Sorry for a very late reply. I stopped writing for a while. I'm still in Bkk, always super busy. Now, I'm still struggling to find time to go back to my #1 hobby, poetry. Hope you're doing well, healthy and safe always. Miss you. Btw, Congrats on this amazing write and win. I read other poems of yours too. love and hugs

Constance La France July 11, 2019 at 8:32 PM Nette, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful poem and what a lovely image too!

Jan Allison July 9, 2019 at 11:44 AM We chose the same stunning flower nette,many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee July 8, 2019 at 2:53 PM Beautiful...congrats on your win.

Kurt Ravidas July 8, 2019 at 12:46 PM Freesia is my favorite flower. I'm very glad it won. Perfect form and content that are worth of gold. Congrats, Net.

Sandra Adams July 8, 2019 at 10:04 AM Your poem is as beautiful as the flower itself....congrats on your top win :) hugs

David Drowley July 7, 2019 at 5:15 PM Nette, Beautiful poem. Well-deserved win! David

David William Breidenthal July 4, 2019 at 6:55 PM Fantastic way of writing! Super cool piece! -JWE

Banjo Casto July 4, 2019 at 4:02 PM Truly, this poem is "lush", "enchanting." Rating it tops!

Frederic Parker July 4, 2019 at 10:09 AM beauty describing beauty dear poet...well done

Gershon Wolf July 2, 2019 at 9:19 PM Just gorgeous, nette. You weave everything together so flawlessly. Colors and imagery extraordinaire, fully engaging this reader's senses. :) gw

Heidi Sands July 2, 2019 at 4:58 PM Beautiful Nette. I enjoyed this :)

Ralph Sergi July 2, 2019 at 3:33 PM a beautiful flower poetically described with such rhythm. Good Luck!