Freely Discoursing My Concourse

Concourse with no passenger limits
Un-restricted access to all corridors
Freely navigating space and time
Winding aimlessly along each meter
Easy, un-restrained, rhythmless strides
No pattern to my steps
Pausing for no apparent reason
Deliberately browsing through each strand
Informally addressing every subject I meet
Disconnected from the discourse around me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 1, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Congrates on having your poem featured this week Stephen nicely done love Jayne
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September 29, 2010 at 8:21 AM
hello! Stephen, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
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September 29, 2010 at 8:21 AM
STEPHEN, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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September 27, 2010 at 6:42 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Stephen. Love, Carol
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September 27, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your win Stephen in John Freeman's contest "Your Free Verse Precept" Love,Carol
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September 26, 2010 at 2:55 PM
"Concourse" I love the imagery. Congratulations on your win in the contest, Stephen! Peace, Audrey
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September 26, 2010 at 11:56 AM
You truly describe the liberties we have in free verse syle, Stephen. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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September 26, 2010 at 11:26 AM
Freedom to discourse your concourse is what precept is about Stephen. "Congratulations" and thanks for your worthy presentation. Agape, Moses
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September 26, 2010 at 10:30 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Stephen
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September 26, 2010 at 10:05 AM
Congrats Stephen on your big win in John's contest with these great words so poignant.. enjoy sweet success this happy Sunday with luv..
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