Freeing Her Tangled Soul

With broken wings like bullet struck birds,
She delivered to him these final words.

~Freeing Her Tangled Soul~ A poem by me.

Your dangerous gazes of serenity which
 served my aching eyes as primary sources
 of remedy now transformed my mystic
 pupils into microscopically shattered
 particles of hazardous glass and ageless
 grazes, scars carved and crafted artistically
 with your sharp perfidious razors.

Feelings which filled and fanned my
 frowning heart with cool forest-berry like
 breezes now buried beneath uncontainable
 blood boiled streams silently yet violently
 imploding through my fragile veins like
 detonated vibrational waves as volcanic
 tears erupt from the deepest and darkest
 valleys behind my retinas. Spilling
 enchantingly beautiful rivers of fiery lava
 which patiently erode the glittery sparkle 
as they ooze and simmer across the surface of
 my flowery cheeks pasting historic
 memories of venomous broken promises
 where my story will now lie, stripped from
 its fabricated disguise...there in its
 complete truth. A pure soul once tangled
 up in the ropes of your deceitful eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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