Notes About The Poem

THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

Freeflowing An Open Verse

FREEFLOWING
 sprawling
 unsentimental
yet compassionate
 the mystery
of consciousness


the  pictorial
 deciphered
in
the
 discovery
by
 the thrill
of a
 lost world

 more perfect
in  season
 heartwarming
with
chaotic energy
of
 free-flowing
 fantasies
alight
 to
 bring
 alive
the
 impossible

to imagine
the hysterical
in
 the historical
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May 13, 2023 at 8:17 AM
Brian, your poetry has beautiful melodic undertones. With your word choice and creativity, it is very satisfying.
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